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Old April 11th, 2011 (12:52 PM).
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Originally Posted by View Post
the starter pokemon looks like Luxray
Well no duh it looks like Luxray, it's got Luxray's head on Lucario's body with Zoroark's claws. It's not terrible, but I think you (or whoever your spriter is) could afford to make it look like less of an edit; change the head shape, maybe, or add spikes to the mane or something.

As for the game, it looks okay and it's got a cool name, which is always a plus. Your presentation could use some work though; at least break the post up with centering, underlining, and images. The first post is the first impression people have of your game, after all! Good luck. c: