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Old May 11th, 2011 (10:42 AM).
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    I have no complaints! Perfecto, aside from a couple typos in the text~

    Hm. I shall give it 8.5? Maaayyybbeee a bit of work from Ryuu's house to the reaping may have added flavor. .5 for the minor typos and grammar I found. Although, my grammar isn't the best, so... xD

    Hopefully, I should have the Human District up~! Finally got the internet working on my main computer!
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