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Old May 18th, 2011 (9:06 PM).
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Kiriya White......
     
    Join Date: Apr 2011
    Location: On The Earth
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    Nature: Timid
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    Dude. It's not that she's being mean its called tough love. And secondly, you need to make sure that your SU is long and detailed, you can thoroughly explain how your character fell and how it changed your characters life and that could take a paragraph. What you need to do is to take this advice with pride, and to use this as a springboard to write better SUs in the future so that this won't happen again.
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