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Old June 20th, 2011 (1:42 AM). Edited July 11th, 2011 by WackyTurtle.
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    Originally Posted by DForte View Post
    The story sounds very interesting, but it almost sounds as though it starts in the middle. I know you don't want to give out too many details, but maybe you should describe how you obtained your first pokemon or if you already have or something in that sense. Like I said, it sounds like a great story, I just don't think enough is explained.

    Also, I'm not quite sure, but it sounds like each city will have a gym (arena is what you're calling it I guess) and it sounds like each one will have only one trainer to battle against. Maybe you could make each one have multiple trainers similar to the Battle Tower in the mainstream games. I could be wrong about your thought process, but this is also just a suggestion if you have not given any thought to something like this.
    You've been a Pokémon trainer for a while now, and already have a Pokémon at Lv. 15. The Pokémon you begin with is decided by a short personality quiz, or an 'Application Form' for the competition.

    And as for the arena in each city, there will be a set of Colosseum-style battles against several trainers for each arena, somewhat similar to the Battle Tower but in front of an audience and with an announcer, so more akin to the console games' battles.
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