Thread: FireRed hack: Pokémon Cobalt [Indefinite Hiatus]
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Old July 11th, 2011 (5:01 PM).
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    Originally Posted by Spherical Ice View Post

    Yes, I have considered it. No, I'm not doing it. And no amount of persuasion will make me want to, so don't attempt.
    OK. That's fine by me. So, I've played through your hack,
    and I have a few bugs to report.


    Instead of "it possible", you should make the Hiker say, "it's possible".

    Jack of Hearts appears to block the way and he has no talking script
    after the Fossil event. Maybe you forgot to set a flag there.

    Grammar error. It's "its", not "it's". You need to distinguish the differences between the two words.

    When I walk on that tile again, the Super Nerd tends to walk on the Player.

    Maybe you didn't notice it, but it's "eighth", not "eigth".

    So, overall, it's a pretty nice beta.

    I'll give you a five if it has fewer grammar and spelling errors.
    I am now an anime dubber, cover singer and a fan of anime. I can still apply as a translator and grammar corrector, though.