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Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman View Post
Hey! I'm loving the new layout!

Okay, now on to the new stuff. I'll be rating all the sections out of 5, and explaining why.

Introduction - 5/5 This is so full of win. I loved it so much. All the detail in this sentence is just amazing.
Many, many thanks! <3

I have to give some credit to Abnegation for that. His writing skills brought it to life, and I love him for it!

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman View Post
Azelon Region - 5/5 First, the world map looks great. A lot of vareity, tons of landmarks... It's just great. Second, I love the oligarchy idea with the elite four. Nice touch. But about the starters... Can you only choose from the water and grass types? It'd be a shame if you had to.
Didn't NikNaks do just an amazing job? I think he did.

Regarding the Elite Four, I thought I'd add my own little ideas in for them. I'm really glad you like the idea itself! Now, onto the starters.. No, you can choose from water, grass, and fire. I guess I must have left little ol' Lavapho out! o3o;

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman View Post
Characters - 5/5 They are all very well sprited, and their descriptions are very nice. You gave them personalities. That's something you don't see to often.
Once again, thanks! o3o

This is a personal pet peeve of mine; if I play a game, the characters MUST have some sort of personality. I give all of my characters' personality, regardless of what series it is. I try to make them likable, and even if they aren't, at least .. they have something that makes them stand out among the rest.

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman View Post
Screenshots - 4/5 first I'd like to comment on the different styles you used on the mapping. The outdoor maps is full of life, but the indoor maps are dull and boring. I'd suggest you choose a different indoor tileset. The forth map looks very empty at the top. And in the eight screen... Is that a house from FRLG? But I know you, it's probably a placeholder or something.
Thanks, I suffer from mapping, so, I'm somewhat surprised to see someone likes them! Indoor maps especially. I am currently ripping some indoor tiles from HGSS, so, it'll match the style.

Yeah, some maps are empty, because they're not fully completed. And yes, you're right! It is a placeholder, at least, until I find me a decent house to shove in there. It's meant to be a rest house for traveling trainers.

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman View Post
Overall Score - 19/20

If you want, I could take a look at your maps and.. I dunno, edit them a little?
Thanks for offering, I'd be very happy if you could do that for me. <3

NOTE: I just noticed... the font is quite blurry. If anyone knows how to fix this, please, let me know!
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