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Old August 13th, 2011 (8:01 AM).
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Originally Posted by Sgt Shock View Post
I usually don't get to in depth unless it is a species that you don't know. But, I'll admit, I'm physical description paragraph person at all. You get a little here and a little there. I'll trick you into reading it by saying things like: he swept the threads of his blonde hair from his face. I'm sneaky like that.
I've been trying to do this more lately. I have a nice mental image of what my characters look like, but I can't fit it in a paragraph on its own without detracting from the story itself. So far, not counting the artwork I did a while back which is now outdated, I've revealed my character's blonde-ish and has a grey cardigan. All this without deviating from the actual plot, so I'm rather proud of myself.
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