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Old October 8th, 2011 (4:22 AM).
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I actually can't tell the difference between the two, but anyway. I actually like the colours in this. But the big issue is that your focal takes up too much of the tag. You should have made it a little smaller since then it would leave more room for your effects. However, even though you made the focal quite big, it's still hard to make out. Your effects and textures in this are too heavy and I struggle to make out what's going on. It's too bright around in is head, which makes it hard to see. The effects in the background look quite low quality. The biggest thing here is the lack of quality and clarity. It's extremely messy, and the clipping masks are a little unwarranted. But again, I like the colours, reduce the size of the focal and try not to blur your effects so much as this just looks quite low in quality.
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