Thread: [Pokémon] Thoughts Upon Passing
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Old December 6th, 2011 (4:01 PM).
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Originally Posted by SuperTrainStationH View Post
Wow, that thing you mentioned at the end of the second quote was an excellent observation. I never read it like that before and you're right.

I didn't see it because me having written it myself in the first person, I knew what the Pokémon was feeling and thinking and intending with those words.
That's often the case. Everyone sees a story differently, and sometimes even the author can be surprised by what people dig out of their prose, haha.

I can't say I'd change it yet though, since I get the impression you seemed to like it a bit even though it through you off. Is that right?
Oh yeah, I did like it. Definitely. I'm sorry if I didn't make that clear. I just tend to focus on problems more than positives . . .
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