Thread: [Pokémon] Everyday [PG-13]
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Old April 5th, 2012 (8:41 PM).
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    Your formatting is tough to read. Instead of writing them in one single paragraph split them up.
    "Are you sure its hatching, Laya?" Tamaska asked, watching the cracking egg worriedly.
    "Of course it is is." Laya answered, watching the yellow nose pop out of the egg.
    Do the same for the entire story.
    As for the story it's quite interesting.I wonder what will happen to the cyndaquil next!
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