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Old May 14th, 2012 (6:02 AM).
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Ah thanks! Actually not the answer I was hoping for....but there was one mistake in my story. Not explaining that Tiffany seeing Carlos's ***** was an exceptional case. Normally ghosts couldn't be seen by humans...which is why the rocket grunt couldn't see them.(You see Gengar removed her spirit from her body which she 'thought' was teleportation. I mean if the Team Rocket successfully stopped police from entering, a girl entering and leaving without notice would be silly right?) What Carlos said in the sentence you bolded plus him saying to Tifanny that the rocket grunt couldn't watch him were lies...well the main character need not say the truth every time eh?

Also.HOLY CRAP I shouldn't have overdone the foreshadowing....
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