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Old June 27th, 2012 (10:18 AM). Edited June 27th, 2012 by Mana.
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Ryan is looking good! Would you mind expanding on Biography section a bit though? Maybe talk about how Ryan got Cubby and Devon. You also mentioned Gym battles so it would be good to expand that and be more specific (who? how well did it go? etc.).

Bare in mind that receiving your ticket will be the first 'event' once we get going, so you can leave that out for now.

*puts Ryan on the character list*

edit:// Also, Pokémon should only have on Ability (like in the anime/games).

WestsideConnection reserved!~ 48 hours from now is the limit if that's ok
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