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Old July 9th, 2012 (3:12 AM).
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    Nice story, not too much is given away, but the general gist of it is revealed, I like that.
    I'm hoping the characters sprites are placeholders deeming to be changed.
    Spoiler:

    This bit, has an awful resemblence to: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m43dpe0yZl1r0zbvj_frame2.jpg
    In B/W2 (I'd post a screenshot but I can't find one, and have no time to make one myself.)

    All in All, the story is somehwat good, but chracter and mapwise you need some more work.
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