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Old July 9th, 2012 (3:12 AM).
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Join Date: Feb 2009
Age: 22
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Nice story, not too much is given away, but the general gist of it is revealed, I like that.
I'm hoping the characters sprites are placeholders deeming to be changed.

This bit, has an awful resemblence to:
In B/W2 (I'd post a screenshot but I can't find one, and have no time to make one myself.)

All in All, the story is somehwat good, but chracter and mapwise you need some more work.