Thread: [Pokémon] Pokemon Records
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Old July 20th, 2012 (5:36 PM).
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    Nice I like it but here are some errors I found. I marked them correctly with a thingy after them n.n Btw I will be watching.

    Why did they hunt* all of his friend with no reason at all? Why did he survive*.
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