View Single Post
  #171    
Old August 2nd, 2012 (6:21 PM).
Lt. Col. Fantastic's Avatar
Lt. Col. Fantastic Lt. Col. Fantastic is offline
The Arianator
     
    Join Date: Apr 2012
    Location: America
    Age: 21
    Gender: Male
    Nature: Sassy
    Posts: 698
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers View Post
    I like your distraction And yeah, perhaps you can try to be a little more coherent in your posts, but I like that you give us a feeling for what's going on in Vinnie's mind

    Uh huh. I like writing like that, but my English Teacher said no one could understand it if I jumped too much...and I actually trimmed it down a bit when I edited. But the moments like that in the future will be shorter and less frequent, as well as a bit more coherent.
    __________________


    Mr. Aladdin sir! Have a wish or two or three!
    Reply With Quote