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Old August 15th, 2012 (8:38 AM).
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Son of a Snivy and a Zoroark
     
    Join Date: Aug 2012
    Location: Cda' Idaho
    Age: 18
    Gender: Male
    Nature: Docile
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    So far I like the story. I think there should be some more background on Sammy though. It was rather short as well. Numbers under 20 should be written out for example instead of "sammy is 13" put "sammy is thirteen" good luck with the story!
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