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Old September 6th, 2012 (7:34 PM). Edited September 7th, 2012 by TornZero.
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    Well, I'm seein' two claims on Lust and Kindness! Wonder who'll get this one first, and which one'll have to edit.

    Kiklion, I'm noticing that you're putting multiple forms for your Hell Form. Please try keeping it down to a single form, as one should be more than sufficient--both in super-awesomeness and ability. Also, concerning your powers, you'll need to include a real balancing act in their effects (for example, Leonard's gravity manipulation puts so much strain on him that he has trouble moving, and Akira can't move at all while he's using his force field), and not all of them have to be directly related to the Sin and Virtue you take. (Take a look at the other character sheets posted so far for a few examples, both Holy and Hell. You'll notice arguably unrelated powers still being applicable to the characters' sins and virtues.)

    I will be moving my account to Songbird over the course of immediately. The signature will stay as is for posterity and reference.