Thread: [Pokémon] The Unova's Flower
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Old September 29th, 2012 (6:49 PM).
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I don't wish to assume, but may I ask if English isn't your first language? It's just what I guess by the fact that the first chapter of this is in Indonesian and the English chapter has quite a few common errors.

Still, your story is breaking the section's rules. Script fics with no description to them and that are just dialogue aren't welcomed here. Also, we ask for some cleanliness to the story so that it's easy to read. It's also going to be difficult to get readers if your first chapter is in a language not everyone can understand.

If you want, you can ask around for a beta reader. They'll help you with writing your story, answering questions and checking over your work before you post it.

Good luck to you. And thread closed.

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