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Old September 30th, 2012 (9:02 PM). Edited October 1st, 2012 by mrsnuggles.
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    Join Date: Sep 2012
    Location: USA
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    this is my first time RPing but here goes nothing :D

    the SU is incomplete but any critique is welcome :3

    Name: Timothy

    Nickname (Optional): Timmy, little tim,

    Age (10-13):13+

    Sex (Male or Female): male

    Appearance (A picture can be provided instead of a description if you so wish.): Minimum of 3 lines if no picture is provided.

    Normal: he is a small child standing at only 4 feet 7 inches (139.7 cm), with short brown hair & hazel eyes. Despite his size he has a fairly muscular build. He wears dark pants that are barely off the ground, & a light short sleeved shirt. He prefer to wear a hat to help keep hidden his change when fused.

    fused; his look when fused varies based on Frankie's emotions it ranges for just his hair changing to the light brown color of a primeape to long reddish hair that stands straight, he also occasionally get primeape's nose.

    Personality (How does your character act and react to others? Their mental state? Flaws and/or personal weaknesses?): 4 lines minimum

    History (Where did your character grow up? Who did they grow up with? What have the been doing before this? Any noteworthy events?): 4 lines minimum

    Timothy was Born in jubilife city. His parents tried desperately to keep him a secret from the town. then when he was around the age of 3 his parents dumped him off into the cave, because the town had decided run inspections for all house holds of the town. After a day & a half of him walking blindly around the cave slave traders form the underground Picked him up eventually selling him off to an older couple in eterna city. Where he grew up abused tortured & over worked. Growing up He was the person every one bullied & because of his shy nature & circumstances he never did anything about it. Even after he got his Poke-spirit he kept it a secret, because he new all to well what would happen if it was found that he had one. Unfortunately when the found that he did have one it was decided that he was going to be punished for keeping it a secret. The punishment they had decided for him was death, because he had not fused with Frankie he was having trouble fusing. When he finally did he blacked out & Frankie took full control of his body. He instantly went into a full rage because of he had watched Timmy being treated. He used overheat which immediately burnt the four children & one adult along with the binding the had him in, killing them instantly. After killing a few other people Frankie ran off into the eterna forest, soon collapsing from exhaustion they unfused. Timothy woke up the next day sitting their as the memory of the previous days event flooded into his mind. they have since lived off the land avoiding any major place except the underground & the children's city if they couldn't help it. during this time Frankie help Timmy open up revealing his true self.

    Pokéspirit (No legionaries. Alternate color schemes are allowed.)
    Species: Primape

    Nickname (Optional): Frankie, Frank

    Personality (Can be as short or long as you want): Frankie is very compassionate spirit when it comes to those he trusts, Unfortunately its hard to come by. Al tho he compassionate he can lash out randomly because of his extreme anger problems (which all primapes seem to have to a degree). This makes it difficult for Timothy To find any one With whom he can share a mutual trust. Also His compassionate nature helps to control Timothy's indifference & general Hatred of people. He also Has a very deep sense of pride.

    Moves (Maximum of 6. TM and egg moves are allowed. These are the moves your character gets when they fuse):

    Rage, Closet Combat, Overheat, Workup, Rain-dance, Bulldoze (note: Overheat can only be used when he is fully enraged while fused.)

    Other (Optional): This is where you put any unique traits, quirks, or additional powers your poke-spirit may give your character. If they're based on quirks or abilities the original Pokemon had, you have a high probability of being accepted.
    Other: Anger Point Ability

    Opening Post (This will be what we use to determine whether your writing skills are good enough. If accepted, you may feel free to copy paste your post here into the IC thread.): I would recommend a minimum of 8 lines and a maximum of 20, but it's your choice.

    updated with the appearance
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