Thread: [Pokémon] Seven Paths, One Heart
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Old October 5th, 2012 (7:24 PM).
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Hello everyone! I'm Obsidian5, known on other sites (i.e. as an extremely talented writer, and I'm here to share the talent!
I now present, the 100% unedited version of...
Seven Paths, One Heart I
Silver Futures

“Gaaah!” The Espeon cried as she heaved. Soleon, an Espeon was giving birth for the first time. “Come on, Soleon, you can do it! You’re Eevee’s almost out!” Said her brother, Luneon, an Umbreon. Finally, with one last scream, Soleon’s child’s egg was out. She gazed at the egg lovingly. “A girl… the egg is smaller than a boy’s,” said the father, Heateon.
Nine Months Later…
“She’s hatching!” Soleon cried in joy, completely not noticing the small pink cat floating behind her. Then again, Mew was invisible, so how could it expect her to see it? Noticing the small Eevee in the egg, Mew thought, Oh no … that Eevee wouldn’t survive past the next week! Wanting to help the first-birthing mother, Mew asked Dialga to stop time. Quickly rounding up a Fire Stone, Water Stone, and Thunder Stone, she deposited them at the clearing before collecting some Stardust, a Moon Stone, a Sun Stone, a Leaf Stone, and some Nevermeltice. She crushed them all up in a stone bowl and sprinkled the Stardust on it. Mixing the concoction up, Mew somehow managed to get the Eevee to swallow the fine Evolutionary powder. Telepathing for Dialga to start time again, Mew flew off, waiting for the events to come…

Now, please remember that this is COMPLETELY UNEDITED and wrote quite a few months ago. So yes, it does improve. But I simply must cringe at what I thought was awesome when I first wrote it.
On with the same name.

My first hack-- Pokemon Emerald Origin.
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