Thread: [Pokémon] Marowak: The Avenger
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Old November 4th, 2012 (9:35 AM).
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    Originally Posted by Volcanix769 View Post
    How is it not? I posted this in 3 different websites and I constantly check on all of them. I do try and when I posted this before, I revised some words and stuff.
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    You said that you weren't checking carefully. This is getting all backwards now. But one thing for sure is that you should be proofreading before you even post, and the thing about trying is that you should actually try to provide some sort of imagery and other descriptions to give flavor to your story.
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