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Old November 9th, 2012 (6:40 PM).
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    As Heracles4 said, this is in the wrong section. All stories go in the main forum of this section. I can move it for you.

    He should have at least pointed out the grammar issues that he saw so you can improve on them. Otherwise, you'll never know what you did wrong, and you might think that that means you can never post your stories here. Which isn't true.
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