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Old November 10th, 2012 (4:06 PM).
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Uh, I didn't do it
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Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: Minnesota
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Nature: Brave
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Honestly, I wonder if this was written as a joke. It's so badly done. Names and countries aren't capitalized, no dialogue puncutation whatsoever, common words aren't spelled correctly, and there's no format at all. The only way I can believe it's not a joke or really really bad writing is if you're writing as a Pokémon, which even then, it's not even worth reading.

Suggestion, use a writing program like Microsoft Word, should filter out some of the terrible spelling, and then start researching proper English grammar, because there's none to be had here.