Thread: Gold hack: Pokemon Gadolinium
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Old December 3rd, 2012 (6:56 AM).
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You should fix grammar stuff like "im" and "Sry" as well as the "s" that doesn't fit in the textbox and the three extra exclamation marks.

And "old ruins of Professor Elm's old lab" is redundant, but not that big a deal.

+1 for Gen 2 hack though. Hope you keep at it :D
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