Thread: Ruby hack: Pokemon Dark Rage
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Old December 27th, 2012 (5:36 PM).
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    While some of the tiles are iffy, I understand that they're just placeholders until you can get better ones.

    The story was pretty good, but I couldn't help noticing this:
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    Your father, the regional champion, left you and your mother when you were just a small child for reasons unknown. You and your father are distant, but you understand that he had his reasons for leaving.
    Haha, I would expect you and your father to be distant if he's been gone for years...

    As always this hack has potential, I hope you can bring in some quality that most hacks haven't been able to do lately. Good luck!
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