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January 21st, 2013 (11:54 AM).
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Firstly, I hope that you are Italian yourself and know what you're talking about, because I don't want any real Italians taking offense from your SU ^^;
Secondly, he grew up at a monastery and is roaming Europe now, more or less? So how come he starts playing MAO? He doesn't seem to have ever heard of pokémon before. How did he afford a NerveGear? Does he even have a home to play in, or where is he when he starts the game?
I'd like you to connect his wild history with why and how he entered MAO. Other than that, I liked the SU and your writing ^^
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