Thread: [Demo] Pokémon Melanite Version
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Old January 21st, 2013 (8:07 PM).
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    The two tones you're using for the red text are too close. The letters look indistinct as a result. Try just making the light red lighter, that should help.

    Other than that it looks pretty good.
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