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Old February 12th, 2013 (7:27 AM).
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Nakuzami Nakuzami is offline
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Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Ylisse
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Nature: Jolly
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I don't think you pushed things forward too far at all. Dragging out the tactics conversation would have become redundant rather quickly. It was already heading in that direction as it was, anyways, lol.

One thing I think should be done in the future, however, is for a more detailed description of target buildings to be posted. At first, our warehouse started out as not even having windows. Then Geras added windows. Then they became covered in grime and were composed of solid, apparently difficult to open, glass.
It would just make things go more smoothly, lol. d:

I'll post later . . . when I'm not in school, and perhaps after some others have posted.
A burdened heart sinks into the ground
A veil falls away without a sound
Not day nor night, wrong nor right
For truth and peace you fight
Sing with me a song of silence and blood
The rain falls, but can't wash away the mud
Within my ancient heart dwells madness and pride
Can no one hear my cry

Embrace the dark you call a home,
Gaze upon an empty, white throne
A legacy of lies,
A familiar disguise
Sing with me a song of conquest and fate
The black pillar cracks beneath its weight
Night breaks through the day, hard as a stone
Lost in thoughts all alone
In the white light, a hand reaches through
A double-edged blade cuts your heart in two
Waking dreams fade away,
Embrace the brand-new day
Sing with me a song of birthrights and love
The light scatters to the sky above
Dawn breaks through the gloom, white as a bone
Lost in thoughts all alone

In endless dreams, countless realms collide
Hope falls only to rise like the changing tide
But all dreams come to an end,
Just whispers on the wind
Sing with me one last time, for light's sacrifice,
Endless dawn came but not without a price,
Lost in the waves there glimmers, a pale blue stone.
I think of you, all alone
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