Thread: [Other FULL] Youkai Academy [OOC/SU][T]
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Old February 13th, 2013 (2:56 PM).
Lilizuki Lilizuki is offline
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    If the person hadn't attacked Solo, Solo wouldn't have tried to murder them. This person has no backstory or genuine reasons for doing so besides petty revenge; they're no antagonist or villain that has reasons for what they're doing, and they provide nothing for character development or the setting as a whole. If I were to give constructive criticism (Which is worthless at this point, and most people take offense to telling them how they should play their characters), I'd have built up this werewolf so he is a character himself. He could have served to explore Solo's prejudice against werewolves, comparisons between the two characters that could have led to deeper and more sympathetic relationships for both characters.

    Without any kind of development for this person, they're nothing but a catalyst for Solo to angst over.

    @Khawill: I'm sure everybody will come in to agree with you.
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