Thread: [Other FULL] Atlantis Awakening [OOC+SU] [M]
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Old March 1st, 2013 (9:37 AM).
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    Originally Posted by 雷影 イチロ View Post
    Of course you can join. If you can, maybe put a little more into your Sign Up? Making paragraphs longer and bigger, also expanding on his history. About your ability, it seems that you have adapted this from another source, which is good, but in Atlantis, dragons are as much a myth as they are in RL and as such not really a part of this RP. If you could change it, perhaps to something like rage-fueled aggression that allows him to have increased strength and reflexes would be fine, but a "virtually unstoppable force" is a no.
    Fixed what you mentioned, I will work on a writing sample, and I added some more to my history.
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