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Old March 5th, 2013 (10:39 AM).
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    Hey, I have an issue of how you don't space the sentences, or when you don't space where it says the name of the character talking. Here's an example of what I mean:

    ELLIOT:Now Lisa!Let's battle!

    Not exactly from the game, but this was what I meant. You seem to do it consistently and it makes it harder to read the dialogue.
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