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Old June 29th, 2013 (7:25 AM).
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    Originally Posted by Aceraptor View Post
    dudebot thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate that I'll work on making revisions to the story as soon as possible. I guess it was pretty good for a 15 minute story lol.
    On the contrary, this is a plot that can be made into an entire series without seeming dragged out. Seven protectors, all with these different personalities, striving to catch these different legends in order to have the opportunity to either protect or capture Arceus.

    Tie in the gym battles and being League champion, you've got a five-star Pokemon game plot.
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