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Old August 19th, 2013 (9:49 AM).
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Originally Posted by Kura View Post
If you wrote this for your girlfriend, it's from the heart and from you.. and I don't think we have any business in coming in to critique your wording on your feelings.. after all, only you can decide if you think those are the right words and phrases to express your love.

Sorry, I don't see the point in offering you my feedback.. but maybe others will disagree and will want to fix your grammar, sentence structure, etc.
i can see that you want us to tell you how we feel about it, but it's all on your thoughts and feelings. our opinions wouldn't help. it's cute tho!

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