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Old August 18th, 2012 (6:49 AM). Edited August 18th, 2012 by Zagan.
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King of Demons
    Join Date: Jul 2012
    Location: UK
    Age: 29
    Gender: Male
    Nature: Quirky
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    my Sign up, hope its good enough:

    Name: Ray

    Nickname (Optional): Total

    Age (10-13): just a shade over 13

    Sex (Male or Female): Male

    Appearance (A picture can be provided instead of a description if you so wish.): Minimum of 3 lines if no picture is provided.

    Personality (How does your character act and react to others? Their mental state? Flaws and/or personal weaknesses?): Total gets on well with other kids (as well as his Poke Spirit Dusk), but with any adult, regardless of what they say, he will attack to kill on sight. When he is not fighting for his life, he tries to remain calm, but is prone to fits of despair from having so much blood on his hand, his main flaw is his desire to play the hero (freeing kids from the adults) regardless if they want to be saved or not.

    History (Where did your character grow up? Who did they grow up with? What have the been doing before this? Any noteworthy events?): 4 lines minimum

    Celestic town, one of the first places to be abandoned by the adults, meaning the kids were able to live there for a bit, but that did not last long and the adults came back, causing the kids to scatter, Total among them, with no idea where to go in the barren lands that years ago had been called Sinnoh,
    after days, maybe even weeks, Total found himself in what used to be Mt Coronet. Stumbling around in the dark for who knows how long, before he found the large crystal formation, starved into a state of hallucination he found the crystal and read the words, believing he was dreaming, he stood there stunned looking up at the large crystal, taking in the words "BRING YOURSELVES TO JUSTICE" he was unaware that the poke spirit had left the crystal, almost like a fruit dropping from a tree.

    It spoke to him, but in his dream state of hallucination he looked down, there was more writing – in a language he did not know of, but as he read them, the voice spoke to him, reading the un readable words:

    "The world has been broken, and it is humanity's fault."
    "It is up to you to bring justice to yourselves and the world."
    "You must guide yourself, however..."
    "These are the laws of Arceus!"
    •"Let yourself be washed of your moral preconceptions. From the first time you've read these commandments, let them be your only laws. Then and only then allow yourselves to rediscover what you believe is right or wrong."
    •"You shall not harm the spirit of the pokemon, lest divine retribution strike."
    •"You shall be in possession of no more than six pokemon spirits at any one time, lest your spirit become suppressed."
    •"If you take the spirit of the pokemon from another you must take it for your own, lest it turn on you."
    •"You shall not harm children under the age of fourteen that have not yet received their pokemon spirit."

    Then a pain like nothing before, as the spirit fused with him, Total lost consciousness...

    Pokéspirit (No legendaries. Alternate color schemes are allowed.)
    Fused form: (the cape that Total wears changes and takes on the clothes of this form, the hood also changing to look like the hood in the pic :D

    Species: Dusknoir

    Nickname (Optional): Dusk

    Personality (Can be as short or long as you want): A very old and paternal figure, Dusk will always try and give Total insight on certain situations as well as taking charge of Total, taking care of the youngster – if Total is in danger either from adults or other poke spirit wielders or if he is near death from not taking in nourishment Dusk will take it upon himself to take over Totals body in order to change the situation they are in.

    Moves (Maximum of 6. TM and egg moves are allowed. These are the moves your character gets when they fuse):

    Shadow Sneak
    Shadow Ball
    Focus Blast
    Charge Beam

    Other (Optional): As a ghost type, Dusk gives total the power to act like a true ghost, being able to walk or sink through any surface, and he has the ability to float a few feet of the ground and hover around (HMs Dusknoir can learn: Strength)

    Opening Post (This will be what we use to determine whether your writing skills are good enough. If accepted, you may feel free to copy paste your post here into the IC thread.): I would recommend a minimum of 8 lines and a maximum of 20, but it's your choice.

    Total opened his eyes, he was not in the same place he was, as he sat up, he looked around – he was not in Celestic Town either. He reached up and removed the hood of the cape he had stole before leaving his home before scratching his head, as he looked around, he seemed to be in a forestry area, before he had the chance to ask himself about what had gone on, a voice broke through his subconscious, it sounded very old and more than a little wise.

    You are safe. You are currently in Eterna Forrest – there is no need to panic Total.

    Eterna Forrest? So I wasn’t dreaming? Who, who are you?

    Correct, I am a poke spirit. Many years ago when there were pokemon in the world, I was a dusknoir, well I still am, just in a less tangible form; my trainer named me Dusk – when you were looking at the crystal stone in Mt Coronet –

    WHAT? So that wasn’t a hallucination? Dusk? Nice to meet you, my name is Ray, but prefer to be called Total

    No, out of all the spirits it felt that I had the strongest bond with you, and so by the power of the great Arceus I was granted permission to fuse with you, but as you were near death, my first priority to get some nourishment.

    You found some food? Where – tell me, please where did you ... is this BLOOD on my hands?

    No – not food, as a wielder of my spirit you are able to absorb the essence of others to take nourishment, and in a world where food is scarce – I had to do what I could to help you –

    You KILLED someone? A kid – an innocent –

    Yes. No – I killed an adult, as they are not innocent, it was the adults who came before many a year ago who plunged the world into this mess, and as the stone says, you are to bring justice to this world, however you see fit. I will always be by your side whatever you choose.

    Mr Dusk, just two more questions: Firstly – what would be the best move to make at this time? Secondly, what else happens apart from your being able to speak to me like this?

    No need for the Mr, Total – I would suggest moving from here, perhaps try and find some other children who also have spirits with them. And you can take on part of my form, you will have access to six abilities to fight with, but even in your current form, you have some ghost qualities about you, you are able to mask yourself to others sight as well as no longer having a need for doors, and lastly you have an substantial increase to your physical strength, but continued use of these powers will tire you quickly to begin with, to take my form, all you need do is ask me in your mind, and I will take care of the rest. For now, head to where the poke spirit wielders dwell.

    Total got up, his cape blowing gently in the faint wind, as he looked at it, he saw that it had changed colour, it was now pure black with yellow markings on each side, the outside, the side that others would see from the rear had yellow markings that looked like a smiling face, while the inside had more yellow markings, but made out to look like an angry face, he shook his head as he stood up, pulling the hood over his face, obscuring as much of his face as possible, and set off, he had heard that a lot of kids had taken over Hearthome City and renamed it Child’s City, so that would be his first stop...

    (notes Bold + italic is Dusk ‘talking’ to Total in his mind, just italic is Total thinking to Dusk)
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