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The Citadel of Chaos

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hell-houndoom

AKA Shroud the Hedgehog
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story​
Long ago during the time of the great pokemon wars, chaos was in control, no-one dared to defy them for those who were would be executed, every-one lived in fear, until one day a hero arose to fight the evil force, blessed with incredible power and even greater knowledge of sorcery, he managed to defeat the dark ones and save the earth. Ledgend states that afterwards he sealed all of his power and knowledge in one place should the world ever need it again. Most people believe this as a mear fairy tale but it is true and the same evil force from ten thousand years ago have returned and are trying to gain that power. However someone discovers this and tries to warn everyone, but no-one believes them except for a few. Now they have set out on a quest to defeat the dark ones known as the kumori and find the power sealed away in the Citadel of Chaos.

Basic Rules​
Post your profile before anything, Each character is allowed a maximum of two weapons.Each character may have only one pokemon. You may give you character sorcery abbilities but not so much that it ruins the plot. New players may join after 15 posts but untill then a maximum of 6 (not including myself) but post your profile first. Try not to change the story line. Realationships are allowed aslong as they don't damage the story line to much. Enjoy yourself.Oh and respect each others oppinions even though constructive criitcism is welcome.
Form​
this is the character form each member is asked to fill out

Name :
Nickname: (Optional)
Gender :
Age :
Appearance: (You may provide an image)
Personality :
Past : (Optional)
Pokemon : ( One only please.)(and please provide gender of pokemon)
Weapon : ( 2 MAX.)
Other : (Optional)

Here's mine​

Name:Robert
Nickname:Blades The Slayer/ Blades (for short)
Gender:Male
Age:Uknown
Appearence:A tall male appears weak but has great inner strength,Brown hair with blackclothes wth fire makings on them,and a red cape( see my signature for an image)
Personality: ussually silent,only speaks when necessary or giving a command.Dark, keeps to himself prefers nights to day, a loner.He will ussually kill first and ask questions later, when he does think he thinks long and hard and ussualy comes up with the right answer.He is often quick to criticise and does not enjoy working with others but will if needs be.
Past: His parents were killed as a child and the only friend he had was his houndour,because of this his hatred grew and he grew an extreme hatred for the exeons,and his houndour was no different,they both desired revenge so they went into suclusion and perfected the chaos arts.
Pokemon: A Red Houndoom (male) the same from his child hood he has chaos power equal to his master
Weapon:He is not often caught with a weapon for he ussualy crushes his foe by his mastery of chaos sorcery but if needs be he calls upon the Doom Scythe, However he always carrys a dagger with strange markings on it
 
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_Mighty Mawile_

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This sounds cool!

Name: Jewel
Nickname: Kiria the Kind
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Appearance: A young girl with long light-blue hair that's tied in a ponytail. She's small for her age, most people think she's a 10 year-old. She has a favorite shirt that's light-blue, with purple jeans. She always carries a black purse that have... emergency items! a.k.a: makeup supplies, a belt for wacking bullies!
Personality: Very hyper, especially when she is appolagising (cant spell! XD) to anyone. Can be very sweet, and always looks to the bright side of things. She packs a punch when someone is hurting herself or a friend... then you should watch out!
Past: After dealing with a dreaded fire that killed her grandmother and mother, she decided to go on a journy to find the someone/ something that killed her family. Along the way, she came across an oddly coloured Mudkip...
Pokemon: A yellow Mudkip that can breath an icy breath that, surprisingly, destroys fire! Can also use digging claws!
Weapon: She can rely on a staff that releases a beautiful, but dangerous bright light that iliminates all things within a 30 yard range (except for humans and pokemon).Can also make wishing dreams that come true. The staff is called: "Staff of Wishful Dreaming".
 

~*Nariko*~

Do the hustle! o.o;
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Sounds like fun! I'll join ^.^

Name: Kali
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Appearance: She has messy, deep red hair that hangs just above her shoulders. Her eyes are sharp and a brilliant emerald green color. She usually wears a white t-shirt with a dragon design on the right side and baggy black pants. And, she always wears her black headband.
Personality: She's generaly calm and she's easy to make friends with, but she has a really bad temper and gets annoyed very easily. If her friends ever need help, they can always count on her to lend a helping hand.
Pokemon: A female Sneasel named Silver, due to the fact that it's covered in silver markings.
Weapon: Two swords and the ability to control and produce fire (Is this okay?)
 

Pineapple Pocky

Sometimes being a girl sucks.
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Name : Sora Uzimaki
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Appearance: shoulder length spiky purple hair, black stripe under right eye, grey eyes, baggy black cargo shorts, blue tank top, blue and purple shoes. Here's my favorite pic of her:
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Personality: a spunky loud mouthed girl that usually only talks to a wolf, but when she gets to know someone she's her regular cheery self. But to strangers she's extremly quiet.

Past : Sora doesn't remember much about her past... except that her parents died a long time ago on a mysterious island and she's been living in Vermilion City ever since. After visiting that island to find her parents, and learning the truth she decided to head off anywhere life took her. She really has no destination... yet.

Pokemon: (Male Mightyena) Daisuke- A rather calm and steady wolf around others, but when alone he's got a fun and playful side. Dai doesn't really bother to talk with other pokemon or humans. The only thing he does is protect Sora. He's been friends with her since she was a child and he was a pup, and thev'e grown up like siblings.

Weapon: black Katana and silver Bo (metal pole)
 
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Nigma

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occ: Hey that thread looks cool! I want to say that it would be better if you add something to the plot because it looks so... short, you know. But by the way, i wanna join!

Name : Azami Shisato
Nickname: the forbidden
Gender : male
Age : 20
Appearance:
Azami.jpg

Personality : Azami is a dark and most silent guy that likes to fight everything that moves, but since he has met his pokemon Azusa he has changed the ways. He is still dark but follows now a good way of life and he tries to protect the weaker persons in a very own style. He doesn´t like to speak about his past and about his future, and he didn´t have much friends in life but if he finds a friend, he will protect him against everything without care of his own life. He is stuborn, wild and sometimes shorttempered.
Past : Find it out! ^^
Pokemon : Azusa (see under sign-up sheet)
Weapon : A big and barbaric sword.
Other : He has the ability to become a phantom. In this state he has much sourcery-abilitys, but he hasn´t much experience with that. (some will show up in the adventure)

Name: Azusa
Pokemon: Flareon
Gender: female
Personality: Calm and strong. Likes to take care of Azami but he also likes combat. If Azami morphs into a phantom, Azusa is always a bit afraid of Azami because Azami then likes to kill everything that moves. Indeed she likes Azami very much and she likes the idea of beeing a human to be Azamis girl friend. But that´s a very good protected secret.
 

hell-houndoom

AKA Shroud the Hedgehog
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Great this will do fine for now

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The sun was shining down on the small village and the wind blew in a coll breeze, people there seemed overfilled with joy, except for one. One person had heard the ledgend of the great one and his defeat of the kumori, most people believe this as a fairy tale but it is true and the kumori have returned but no-one believes him.

(in a house in the village a young but tall boy was packing his packpack)

"that should do for a while, we'll be able to make do with what we have" said the boy

"what do you think houndoom have we forgotten anything?"

"HOUND" Replied the bright fire red houndoom

"Right we best get going"

The boy and his houndoom left the house and walked into the lively city center, it seemed thatno-one could find nothing to do.

"hehe... I'm gonna miss this place, but we have no choice"

"come on lets go"

As they left the city gates and headed of towards the forest, the wind was strong but yet enjoyable the smell of flowers and morning dew filled the air, for the first time in months there was peace and quiet.

As they continued he noticed a storm coud coming in fast

" Ohh thats just perfect" He moaned sarcastically

"come on houndoom I see a cave ahead, lets hurry and get in before the stom begins"
The storm was worse than they thought when they got to the cave they were completely drenched

"could this day be any worse!"

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OH by the way this will get a ton more interesting as the story progresses:classic:
 
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~*Nariko*~

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Kali and her loyal Pokemon sat down in the shade of a nearby tree to take a break from their exhausting adventure. It was a nice, sunny day, but from the looks of it, that wasn't going to last long. In the distance, she could see a large storm cloud moving quickly in her direction.

"Sneasel snee sneasel," the Sneasel known as Silver said, gesturing towards the storm cloud.

"Yeah, I know," Kali replied. "It's going to be a while before it reaches us, so lets have some lunch before we find a place to stay."

Silver nodded and watched impatiently as her trainer dug through her backpack, looking for something to eat. To Silver's delight, Kali pulled two apples and a sandwich out of her backpack. She split the sandwich in half and gave half of it to Silver, along with one of the apples.

Not long after they had began eating, they could see the cloud moving overhead. With a loud boom of thunder, it began raining. Kali quickly packed up her stuff and looked around for anything they could use as a shelter from the rain.

"Snee!" Silver exclaimed, pointing at a nearby cave.

"Good work, Silver," Kali praised. "We can stay there until it stops raining." Kali followed Silver into the cave and froze when she came face to face to a bright red Houndoom. "Uh.... maybe we should find somewhere else to stay...?"
 
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Pineapple Pocky

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Sora skipped through the streets of town. She didn't know exactly what town it was, and she really didn't care either. All she knew was she was headed somewhere. She just didn't know where yet. Since her family had died when she was little she didn't have any attachment to her home town, and she was pretty glad to get away from there anyway. Her big "brother" Daisuke, a huge silver and black mightyena that she had trained since she was a kid was pacing next to her. "Why are we here Sora? Shouldn't we be doing something useful?" "Quit complaining, we get to go wherever we want, and you'd rather be working?" "Well... not really." "Alright then!" she ran off ahead, she had spotted a forest.

Dozens of different pokemon species were crawling, climing, and flying around them, all headed under a tree or to their forest homes. "Clouds are coming our way." Daisuke said staring up at the sky. Sora smiled and kept walking. After a few minutes the clouds were overhead, and they were getting soaked.

Sora laughed at the sheet of rain around her. "Hehe... look Daisuke, a storm's starting!" she giggled splashing around in the water. The wolf sighed. "We better find somewhere to hide." he ducked under a tree and scanned the forest. "Look, there's a cave over there. We should go." he snorted running off in that direction. "Oh fine..." She chased after him, but they both hesitated at the mouth of the cave. Sora turned to Daisuke. "Did you hear that?" He nodded. "Uhh... hello?"
 

Nigma

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"It´s always the same..." Azami said. "Everytime we try to go to another interesting adventure it´s raining..." he continued and walked from the way into the forrest. The wet water touched everything from his clothing but as he walked under a big tree it was better. [C´mon, we just hadn´t that much luck...] Azusa replied. Indeed they had visited many different places and they went through much adventures, but always they were followed by rain, storm and cold wind. [Hey look over there!] Azusa said quickly. As Azami looked into that direction he could see a cave where one person after another run in to hide and don´t get wet. "hmmm... there are two possibilitys..." [Which do you mean?] "All the pokemon and poeple know each other and they are friends or a group... or..." [Or what?] "Or it´s the biggest hap i´ve ever seen that everyone in this area has had the same idea..."

Azusa grinned. It was funny and mystery together and it was quiet interesting. [Should we hide in that cave too?] she asked. "Nope..." Azami answered. He looked some minutes around. "Do you see the very big tree in the front of the cave?" [Yup...] "Let´s climb up there. We can watch these poeple and get some rest. And it´s dry..." [Good idea...] It was some time ago since both started the adventure to find the Citadel of Chaos which was called that way in some mystery legends. They climbed up the tree and watched the cave and tried to hear what the persons where talking about.
 

Pineapple Pocky

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Sora peeked into the cave, but couldn't see anything. "Hello?..." Daisuke walked deeper into the cave to come face to face with a sneasel, houndoom, and two people. He ran back out and sat beside Sora. "...I think it's time we went somewhere else..." Sora nodded and headed for the nearest tree.

She sighed and put her head in her hands. "Well... it looks like we're stuck out here for a while."
 
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hell-houndoom

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staring at the 14 year old girl and her sneasle who had just entered

" houndoom back off, you should save your energy" Rob said to his firey red houndoom "you're going to need it" he whispered under his breath

"now on to the matter at hand"

his attention back on the girl who had just entered the cave
" and who are you?"
 

~*Nariko*~

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Kali turned to the boy who had just spoken. "Uh..." she started. "My name's Kali. And this is my Pokemon, Silver. We were just looking for shelter from the rain and we wandered in here. Sorry if we disturbed you or anything."

<Yeah, sorry,> Silver said.

"Would it be okay if we stayed here until the rain stops?"
 

Nigma

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"Always the same..." Azami said to the purple haired girl which came out of the cave and spoke to her pokemon. She had walked to the nearest tree and of course that was Azamis tree which was in front of the cave. Luckily Azami and Azusa had hidden in the tree, so it was hard for everyone to find them. "We are stuck out here too. So, tell me, who are you and why is everyone running into that cave? Is here something special?" he asked.

[I think you know the answer Azami...] "No i don´t and i want to know..."
 

Pineapple Pocky

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Sora looked up to see a boy and a flareon up in the tree. "oh.. hey. There's nothing special in that cave, It's just the best place for shelter." She sighed again an looked back to the cave. "There's just two people and their pokemon in there." She looked back up to the boy. "What are you doing out here anyway?"
 

hell-houndoom

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Looking out at the sky, the future looked bleak. They couldn't get far in this weather.

"looks like were going to be here a while,.......we best go get some fire wood or we'll freeze."

"Houndoom!"

The red houndoom quickly came to its masters side, to notice him staring out at the rain.

"HOUND?" said the houndoom with a confused look on its face

"Come on, the sooner we get this done the better."

and with that they exited the shelter of the cave to see two people, one in tree. Robert stood and stared at them for a while.

"Come on houndoom this is more important" and with that they walked of
 
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Pineapple Pocky

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Sora looked back up at the boy. "So are you looking for something important?" She knew she really wanted to ask him if he knew anything about a Citadel... But she didn't know much about it either.

In her town she heard stories about the strange place, but until recently she hadn't remembered it. After wandering alone for a while it just popped int oher head again. Now she couldn't forget it, mostly because Daisuke kept saying they should find it.
 

Nigma

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"Yes, we are searching the citadel of chaos, but i think that other poeple don´t know much about it." Azami said. [And on top of that she doesn´t know anything about that i think...] Azusa added. Indeed not much poeple knew about the real history about the citadel and what power it contains. The poeple which came out of the cave didn´t be interested in Azami or Azusa, so both got in a good sleeping postion. It wasn´t the first time they had to sleep in a situation like this and under this conditions. As a boy came out of the cave with a houndoom and looked at Azami a while, Azami got nervous. "Who are you looking at? Never seen a person sleeping in a tree?" [Calm down Azami, if i would see someone in a tree i would look that way too...] Azusa whispered to her Trainer.
 
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