Thread: [Pokémon] Pokémon - Legends of Kanto
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Old July 6th, 2011 (10:48 PM). Edited July 6th, 2011 by Lashh.
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    Thanks for your review Astinus, I'll have to look over some of my upcoming chapters for those errors you mentioned when I'm proofreading. I'll probably have to brush up a bit too on some grammar rules, I been out of school longer than I thought haha XD

    It would probably help if I had a beta reader, but the thread took too long and TK never got back to me with some reviews, lol. Like honestly, how often do beta readers come around? It doesn't seem like often, haha. I suck at patience.

    At least you're devoting more time to the characters' home life than just rushing them out the door with Pokemon in hand.
    Yeah, that's just one of the things included in some of the aspects I'm trying to bring to the Original Trainer genre.

    Credit for the theme goes to Hybrid Trainer

    anyways, check out my fanfic, Legends of Kanto
    first volume completed, chapter releases on the way!
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