Thread: [Poetry] Jom's Poems
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Old June 22nd, 2017 (6:13 PM).
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Originally Posted by Vragon View Post
I like this one much more since it implemented a "Who Doesn't" as the connectors for most of the lines. The reasons you list off on who it's hard to love is good and dare I say relatable.

I'll only say that there was one typo I saw with an "of", but the rest seemed fine.
thing was I experienced all those from the same girl lol.

thank you for the criticisms
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