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Old June 24th, 2005 (4:56 AM).
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    Left 1: Oak too tiny...

    Left 2: Flowers too much in pattern. Too boring, Also fix your grammar.

    Left 3: Fix your grammar...and maybe spelling.

    Left 4: Palettes must be messed up

    Left 5: Ditto

    Left 6: Ditto

    Right 1: You need to work on your puncation such as "," etc

    Right 2: No problem

    Right 3: You need to work on the grammar.

    Right 4: Gary too tiny. Also, the PP/HP writing is too pale.

    Right 5: It does not look like an actual mart. Some paleetes are messed up.

    Right 6: Nothing wrong.