FireRed hack: Pokémon: Broken Beacon
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THE HOST IS BROKEN
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Name: Samus
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Appearance: Ok so samus has black hair and wares a suit (Black trowsers, red tie, white colared shirt, black waste coat and back etc) hes not massively tall, just about the right size for his age...
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon: Would it be ok to use normal type pokemon?!?!? If so these:
Persian
Snorlax
Absol
Ditto
Raticate
If i cant reply and ill post different pokmon
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Appearance: Ok so samus has black hair and wares a suit (Black trowsers, red tie, white colared shirt, black waste coat and back etc) hes not massively tall, just about the right size for his age...
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon: Would it be ok to use normal type pokemon?!?!? If so these:
Persian
Snorlax
Absol
Ditto
Raticate
If i cant reply and ill post different pokmon
No, only Bug, Electric, Fighting, Rock, Steel, Water and Ice types are allowed. And Absol is a Dark-type.
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Haku.
(FLAME)...H....A...K..U
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Name: Foxary
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Appearance: A girl who is full of confidence even if she's losing.Her clothes descriped her.Wore Blue-black jacker , long tight jeans and her hair covered her shoulder.
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon:
Steel - electric
1.Electrike evo.. forgot the name rofl..
2.Raichu
3.Magneton
4.Steelix
5.Unexpected pokemon - Registeel
Bug
Electric
Fighting
Rock
Steel
Water
Ice
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Appearance: A girl who is full of confidence even if she's losing.Her clothes descriped her.Wore Blue-black jacker , long tight jeans and her hair covered her shoulder.
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon:
Steel - electric
1.Electrike evo.. forgot the name rofl..
2.Raichu
3.Magneton
4.Steelix
5.Unexpected pokemon - Registeel
Bug
Electric
Fighting
Rock
Steel
Water
Ice
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Name: Volcar
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: Volcar is tall, skinny, with a red hair. He wears a Black jacket, a brown T-shirt, a black boots, and a blue short. His eyes are Brown.
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon:
Rock:
Kabutops
Aggron
Armaldo
Aerodactyl
I think this is a bad one :[
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: Volcar is tall, skinny, with a red hair. He wears a Black jacket, a brown T-shirt, a black boots, and a blue short. His eyes are Brown.
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon:
Rock:
Kabutops
Aggron
Armaldo
Aerodactyl
I think this is a bad one :[
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Vanitas~
Ink Blot
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Name: Auro
Gender: M
Age: 28
Appearance: Auro has silver hair with a blue streak in his bangs (picture Lance of the E4). He is of average build, and is very pale. He has violet eyes, and (if possible to sprite) a scar on his left eye from his Sneasel. He wears a heavy black clerics outfit fit for the snowy climate he resides in. The collar is fur-lined. He wears an off-white cloak over this. He also wears fur-lined black snowboots. (Could be more descriptive if needed.)
Pick one of four: Sloth (ironic b/c he tends to be the go-to guy)
Pokémon: Ice
Glalie
Jynx
Sneasel (strongest)
Piloswine
Lapras (2nd strongest)
Gender: M
Age: 28
Appearance: Auro has silver hair with a blue streak in his bangs (picture Lance of the E4). He is of average build, and is very pale. He has violet eyes, and (if possible to sprite) a scar on his left eye from his Sneasel. He wears a heavy black clerics outfit fit for the snowy climate he resides in. The collar is fur-lined. He wears an off-white cloak over this. He also wears fur-lined black snowboots. (Could be more descriptive if needed.)
Pick one of four: Sloth (ironic b/c he tends to be the go-to guy)
Pokémon: Ice
Glalie
Jynx
Sneasel (strongest)
Piloswine
Lapras (2nd strongest)
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Name: Alejandro
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Appearance: Black robe (skintight until it flares out for the bottom) with silver stripes running down the sides of the arm and sides of the robe. Black hair in a fauxhawk with silver tips on the 'hawk.
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon: Steel
~ Skarmory
~ Steelix
~ Mawile
~ Forretress
~ Metang
Thought Metagross would probably be too uber, but if not, Metagross instead of Metang.
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Appearance: Black robe (skintight until it flares out for the bottom) with silver stripes running down the sides of the arm and sides of the robe. Black hair in a fauxhawk with silver tips on the 'hawk.
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon: Steel
~ Skarmory
~ Steelix
~ Mawile
~ Forretress
~ Metang
Thought Metagross would probably be too uber, but if not, Metagross instead of Metang.
Ok...after seeing that Fire Types aren't a choice...here we go again.
Name: Ryan
Gender:Male
Age:17
Appearance: If I was able to sprite, (I fail miserably) I would just make it. But here is the best I can come up with, description-wise.
Slightly taller than average, around 5'10". Average build.
Black hair with bangs in front to reach eyes, but not cover them. Dark red streaks going through hair as well.
Somewhat of an evil grin (NOTE: he is not intended to be evil, he is just mysterious like that.)
Plain Black trench coat (open) Dark red T-shirt underneath.
Black pants with red accents.
Black boots
Pick one of four: I would say Greed, but seeing as you didn't include that...I guess Envy would work.
Pokémon: Fighting
Poliwrath
Heracross
Blaziken
Hitmonchan
Medicham
Name: Ryan
Gender:Male
Age:17
Appearance: If I was able to sprite, (I fail miserably) I would just make it. But here is the best I can come up with, description-wise.
Slightly taller than average, around 5'10". Average build.
Black hair with bangs in front to reach eyes, but not cover them. Dark red streaks going through hair as well.
Somewhat of an evil grin (NOTE: he is not intended to be evil, he is just mysterious like that.)
Plain Black trench coat (open) Dark red T-shirt underneath.
Black pants with red accents.
Black boots
Pick one of four: I would say Greed, but seeing as you didn't include that...I guess Envy would work.
Pokémon: Fighting
Poliwrath
Heracross
Blaziken
Hitmonchan
Medicham
Serene Grace
Pokémon Trainer
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Name: Muyiwa
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance: Of an african heritage (A black guy, yay :3). Quite tall, about 5"11 to 6 ft. Has quite short hair and prefers to wear a plain white T Shirt and skin tight Jeans. Sometimes wears cool shades and has a cocktail stick in his mouth. Always seen with a grin (not creepy though). Not too muscular, on the slim side (not anarexic). Converse style trainers. ;P
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon: Water Types
Gyarados
Kingdra
Lapras
Empoleon
Milotic
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance: Of an african heritage (A black guy, yay :3). Quite tall, about 5"11 to 6 ft. Has quite short hair and prefers to wear a plain white T Shirt and skin tight Jeans. Sometimes wears cool shades and has a cocktail stick in his mouth. Always seen with a grin (not creepy though). Not too muscular, on the slim side (not anarexic). Converse style trainers. ;P
Pick one of four: Lust
Pokémon: Water Types
Gyarados
Kingdra
Lapras
Empoleon
Milotic
MegaMaccer
If a tree falls in a forest
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Like everyone's saying, brilliant work. Only thing that's bugging me are the few grammar errors in the first post, although that's more a personal vendetta against things like that than an actual problem :P Keep it up ^^
~Kian~
Spriter In The Making
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havnt commented on this but it looks great and i wanna be in it ;)
Name: Kian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Appearance: Average hieght for a 13 year old, hair kinda emoish but a bit shorter and blonde, clothes: white Tuxedo With some nice smart shoes, He has a pair of shades in his tux, has an expensive ring on his hand, and a gold neckless.
Pick one of four: Lust (he lusts after all these differant women the first time the player meets him)
Pokémon: Blastoise, gyrados, Kingdra, Kingler, Milotic
Type: Water
if these are too strong feel free to lower the levels and de-evolve them
I wouldnt mind be any sort of trainer really what ever works for you i guess its your game ;)
hope this is descriptive enough, and good luck with the rest of your game
~Kian~
EDIT: Just noticed someone above with similer stuff Sorry :/
Name: Kian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Appearance: Average hieght for a 13 year old, hair kinda emoish but a bit shorter and blonde, clothes: white Tuxedo With some nice smart shoes, He has a pair of shades in his tux, has an expensive ring on his hand, and a gold neckless.
Pick one of four: Lust (he lusts after all these differant women the first time the player meets him)
Pokémon: Blastoise, gyrados, Kingdra, Kingler, Milotic
Type: Water
if these are too strong feel free to lower the levels and de-evolve them
I wouldnt mind be any sort of trainer really what ever works for you i guess its your game ;)
hope this is descriptive enough, and good luck with the rest of your game
~Kian~
EDIT: Just noticed someone above with similer stuff Sorry :/
Luck
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I'd comment on the story, but I really don't know how to. It's basically a successful attempt at making a GBA game have a dark story.
I decided to do the contest for lulz >w>
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Name:Nyxus
Gender:Male
Age:22
Appearance:A normal robe with a metallic tint. Has plain facial features and has normal hair, apart from a small cowlick to the side. Steel blue gray eyes and jet black hair. He has light tan skin.
Type:Sloth(to fit the normally low speed of steel type pokemon)
Pokemon:
Metagross(Skarmory if Metagross is too strong)
Magneton
Steelix
Scizor/Forretress(don't really care which one, but if it is mandatory, choose Forretress)
Aggronno special sweeping aggron if this gets chosen pl0x
In no specific order of course. I can give movesets too if you want.
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I decided to do the contest for lulz >w>
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Name:Nyxus
Gender:Male
Age:22
Appearance:A normal robe with a metallic tint. Has plain facial features and has normal hair, apart from a small cowlick to the side. Steel blue gray eyes and jet black hair. He has light tan skin.
Type:Sloth(to fit the normally low speed of steel type pokemon)
Pokemon:
Metagross(Skarmory if Metagross is too strong)
Magneton
Steelix
Scizor/Forretress(don't really care which one, but if it is mandatory, choose Forretress)
Aggron
In no specific order of course. I can give movesets too if you want.
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First off, I wanted to say that I really love this idea for the hack. Based on the storyline, I can see that you've spent some serious time and effort in coming up with this original idea. Also, the artwork is stunning and absolutely spectacular :)
Second, because I love contests, I'll submit my character.
Name: Michael Crowley
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Appearance: About 6 feet tall, has a dark feel, I imagine him as a Jonathon Edwards type person (the guy with the "fire and brimstone" sermons). Dark hair, medium build, a little skinny, with piercing blue eyes. Has a dark robe to complete the look. Skin= slightly pale, slightly flushed.
Pick one of four: Lust ( I would pick greed.....but lust it will be)
Pokémon: Ice
Glalie
Jynx
Cloyster
Sneasel
Piloswine
Second, because I love contests, I'll submit my character.
Name: Michael Crowley
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Appearance: About 6 feet tall, has a dark feel, I imagine him as a Jonathon Edwards type person (the guy with the "fire and brimstone" sermons). Dark hair, medium build, a little skinny, with piercing blue eyes. Has a dark robe to complete the look. Skin= slightly pale, slightly flushed.
Pick one of four: Lust ( I would pick greed.....but lust it will be)
Pokémon: Ice
Glalie
Jynx
Cloyster
Sneasel
Piloswine
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Here's my entry for the contest I really like your hack.
Name: Father Fredrick
Gender:M
Age: 29
Appearance: 5'4 in height is usually wrapped up in a heavy robe but for your elite four battle it's off relvealing a criminal apperence spike black spiked hair a teeshirt with the sleeves torn off to Reveal two Rocket Tattoos on each shoulder jeans and black spiked boots but still mockinglly wears the symbol for the belief around his neck.
Pick one of four: Envy (specially chosen by the acolyte from his rocket days because of his extreme envy. Father Fredrck originally Zap a former top rocket who had a great talent for "liberating" people from their worldly belongings which he still practices here in Ho-oh's Crest)
Pokémon:Electric
Raichu
Plusle
Minun
Electabuzz
Jolteon (His Strongest pokemon)
Name: Father Fredrick
Gender:M
Age: 29
Appearance: 5'4 in height is usually wrapped up in a heavy robe but for your elite four battle it's off relvealing a criminal apperence spike black spiked hair a teeshirt with the sleeves torn off to Reveal two Rocket Tattoos on each shoulder jeans and black spiked boots but still mockinglly wears the symbol for the belief around his neck.
Pick one of four: Envy (specially chosen by the acolyte from his rocket days because of his extreme envy. Father Fredrck originally Zap a former top rocket who had a great talent for "liberating" people from their worldly belongings which he still practices here in Ho-oh's Crest)
Pokémon:Electric
Raichu
Plusle
Minun
Electabuzz
Jolteon (His Strongest pokemon)
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Samme!
Haterz gonna hate
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Name: Harold
Gender: Male
Age: 56
Appearance: Harold is about 5'10", which makes him seem rather intimidating.. until you meet him personally. He is also quite husky. with a medium sized beer belly which hangs out a little due to his inability to actually care. He is rarely finicky when it comes to his appearance, which leads him to either looking like a bear, or halfway respectable; usually depending on the situation. Since Harold rarely leaves his house (unless the other members of the Elite force him out for a new challenger that is) he can be found in slippers, a plaid bathrobe, and comfortable looking pants with a few coffee stains on it. He has tired looking hazel eyes, and and brown hair turning white, whether it be on his face or head. He is also quite hairy elsewhere. Even though he generally doesn't care about anything other than his favorite TV show, he loves his pokemon although he doesn't have much confidence in them.
Pick one of four: Sloth
Pokémon: Rock
-Aggron
-Aerodactyl
-Golem
-Magcargo
-Corsola
Gender: Male
Age: 56
Appearance: Harold is about 5'10", which makes him seem rather intimidating.. until you meet him personally. He is also quite husky. with a medium sized beer belly which hangs out a little due to his inability to actually care. He is rarely finicky when it comes to his appearance, which leads him to either looking like a bear, or halfway respectable; usually depending on the situation. Since Harold rarely leaves his house (unless the other members of the Elite force him out for a new challenger that is) he can be found in slippers, a plaid bathrobe, and comfortable looking pants with a few coffee stains on it. He has tired looking hazel eyes, and and brown hair turning white, whether it be on his face or head. He is also quite hairy elsewhere. Even though he generally doesn't care about anything other than his favorite TV show, he loves his pokemon although he doesn't have much confidence in them.
Pick one of four: Sloth
Pokémon: Rock
-Aggron
-Aerodactyl
-Golem
-Magcargo
-Corsola
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Swift!
The Swiftiest
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Name: Vex
Gender: Male
Age: 64
Appearance: Wild grey hairstyle, standing straight up. Judging olive green eyes and sharp 'angry looking' eyebrows. His skin is a light bronze colour. His ears are slightly too big for his head, he has a small button nose, his mouth curls downwards at the corners, and wrinkles line his face. His face is a round-ish shape. He wears a brown monk's robe which has a large round collar and the sleeves get wider at the ends. He keeps his arms crossed and his hands are hidden beneath the robe at almost all times. His shoes are a pair of wooden sandles, but they're hidden by the length of his robe. Also... he's rather short. (I'll let you decide how short exactly xD)
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon: (in order of strength)
Pinsir
Parasect
Shedinja
Beedrill
Masquerain
Gender: Male
Age: 64
Appearance: Wild grey hairstyle, standing straight up. Judging olive green eyes and sharp 'angry looking' eyebrows. His skin is a light bronze colour. His ears are slightly too big for his head, he has a small button nose, his mouth curls downwards at the corners, and wrinkles line his face. His face is a round-ish shape. He wears a brown monk's robe which has a large round collar and the sleeves get wider at the ends. He keeps his arms crossed and his hands are hidden beneath the robe at almost all times. His shoes are a pair of wooden sandles, but they're hidden by the length of his robe. Also... he's rather short. (I'll let you decide how short exactly xD)
Pick one of four: Envy
Pokémon: (in order of strength)
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Lady Berlitz
Cinnamon ♪
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This looks beautiful, so I'll enter the contest.
Name: Do you need a 'pun' of his type? If not, 'Russell' will do. If you do, then maybe 'Cyan' is good. Can't think of anything else. xD
Gender: Male
Age: About 16-17
Appearance: Here - I noticed you wanted a leader in a church, but I already had the design ready, so maybe there can be some changes made to him that way? :)
Pick one of four: Envy
Type: Ice-type
Pokémon: Glalie, Delibird, Piloswine, Walrein, Lapras
Name: Do you need a 'pun' of his type? If not, 'Russell' will do. If you do, then maybe 'Cyan' is good. Can't think of anything else. xD
Gender: Male
Age: About 16-17
Appearance: Here - I noticed you wanted a leader in a church, but I already had the design ready, so maybe there can be some changes made to him that way? :)
Pick one of four: Envy
Type: Ice-type
Pokémon: Glalie, Delibird, Piloswine, Walrein, Lapras
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