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Old January 3rd, 2011 (7:45 PM).
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Cobe Cobe is offline
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    Originally Posted by pokeguy9000 View Post
    Its a good story and i have just a few suggestions.

    1.Why two warps? There could only be one but your dad makes you battle when you try to walk toward it?

    2.If there is a starter of your choice why are then any others? Couldnt the player just choose Pikachu or Lavitar as their choice so there is no need for them as an option.
    By your choice i ment, when giving feedback tell me what other pokemon there should be :P