FireRed hack: Pokemon Destiny

Hey my Name is YungHove, This is how my Hack is going to be.

This is going to be a Fire Red Hack. The story goes like this.
"You and your Mom moved out of Kanto because some weird people were chasing you. So your Dad, a Professor in Johto, moved you to (new region). Your Dad moved you to this Town because your Dad knows the Professor(new name) and the gym leader in the 2 towns. The reason people were chasing you was because the Professor in (new name) Found a Slab of Stone called Destiny in the Cinnabar Mansion. It was excavated near a bunch of Mew fibers. Little did the Professor know, Team(evil people) were creating a new Mew Clone(not Mew two.). On Destiny, it said," A Chosen Child(the main character) will be blessed with the Power of The Creator. He will be born of the day of 30th of May of the year of 1995(thats you.). Thats why the evil people chase you. Only the Evil People and your Dad,Professor(new guy), and the 5th The gym leader(the guy thats supposed to be your Dad in emerald.). Little does anyone know, your new next door neighbor, Is a undercover agent for Team(new evil team). So your story begins to follow your Destiny.(I think it should be called Pokemon Destiny).

New region
New Professor
Some New Pokemon
New Rivals
New Evil/Good Team
Different Starters

Leaders-
Yunghove
X-buster

Miscellaneous(but still important)
X-buster-Title screen editor and our region mapper.

Mappers
YungHove-Main Mapper.
X-Buster-Map Editor.

Scripters
Yunghove-Main Scripter

Spriters
Salamance09-Spriter
...Beyond-Spriter
kanoukono-Spriter

Beta Testers
Eeveon

All the Maps were made by me then handed to X-Buster to touch them up.

Spoiler:

This is Englewood Town

This is Dimitri City.

Route 1

Route 2

Spoiler:

Title Screen made by X-buster.
Pikemew also made by X-buster.

The first battle.

This is Englewood Town.

Entering Dimitri City.

Dimitri PC

Route 1. Englewood town to Dimitri City.

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This is the Birthday Script.
[URL]http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/yunghove/?action=view&current=birthdayvid.flv[/URL]

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o5/13/08 
Got back from Florida.
Made 2 maps.
Also added a Video of my script.
Made Route 1

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[B]05/14/08
Added 4 Screenies to the Screenie Sectrion.[/B]

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[B]05/29/08
Updated first post with remade maps with 
X-Busters Rom base.
[/B]

All the banners were made by me.
This was made by ...Beyond

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http://i30.tinypic.com/i5q4vs.png

This one was made by Islander Jon

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http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/yunghove/1zz48s5.png

These were made by me.

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http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/yunghove/Destiny-support.png

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http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/yunghove/Untitled-1copy.png

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http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll300/yunghove/pokemondestinysupporter-1.gif

Credits go to:
DJG for inspiring me to make a hack after I played his game.
Thethethethe for his Tutorial which taught me how to script.
TB Pro for being my Tutor for scripting.
Meggido for helping me script.
Antwhan for helping me script
(Hey dont laugh, it was hard learning how to script)
X-Buster, for being there and everything hes done for me, I don't think that I could've did this without him.
...Beyond, Kanoukno, and Shadow Arcanine for Making sprites.
Adam for helping me with numerous things.
Eeveon and Neti for giving good criticism on my Maps.
Makunouchi for making me some maps.
And my Wonderful Team.
And Islander John for teaching me how to make Banners.
If you think you belong here, just PM me.

i see you changed the hacks name, similar to DJG, well i think we will have trouble getting out of this area
, we can get in but not out, is that part of it?

Right have some crit. First, in the map on the top right of your screens section get rid of the 'YH'. This is tacky- come on, we know who made the game if we download/buy it!
With your long grass, you have put it in big blocks- grass grows where it gets too. Its not regulated, so break it up. Your maps are also very rectangular- make some wacky shapes with them or something.
You also have some areas which are one type of tile, then adjacent to them areas of another tile. Try to mix a bit.
Also, we do like some variety- if there is an area of just plain grass but a tree or something there.

Wait, wasn't your hack named Pokemon Destiny before?
Cause I have a hack named Pokemon Legends of Destiny.
It's on the 2nd Page

EDIT:
Nvm, it was a different person.
But can you change the name around only a little bit?
Cause my hack is named Legends of Destiny...

How about you say the first to finish keeps the name? As the likelihood is that neither will complete their hack, so in the end it won't really matter.
(Not meaning to be rude, just stating the truth)

Corrosion said:

How about you say the first to finish keeps the name? As the likelihood is that neither will complete their hack, so in the end it won't really matter.
(Not meaning to be rude, just stating the truth)

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Ok...


i made up my mind and...
yunghove, you can keep the name.
I don't care anymore.

No I had a poll on Pokemon Destiny, and people wanted this to be a name, so If its any trouble i will change it back. Also this is supposed to be in hacks showcase not in scrapbox

Well I know you showed me the faults, but what can I do to make them better???

I know that, but some better advice???

Allright thanks, why is AM better than Elite Map???

Ok so im going to re edit my maps.

Hey, fiery chimchar is going to be our lead Scripter since everyone else seems busy.

the story seems a bit weird :? you should explain it better

Hey every one, I made a Support Banner. Its not great, but it'll be in the First Post if you want it. Support Me xD.

heres my post yunghove, i hope it shows up this time.