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Old May 8th, 2011 (6:36 AM).
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7/10/11 R.I.P
     
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    Great Story bro :). I love the story and you're great at writing characters. I can easily understand their personalities :). I like the action you put in chapter three and we've already discussed what I think of Wade.

    As for Zed I think he's a good villain and you've done a great job with his character. :)

    All else I can say is keep writing :)
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