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Old July 30th, 2013 (11:44 PM).
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    I think of I've seen you on Serebii before, ...

    Well, with your sentences, in my opinion they are slightly long, and that there is quite a lot of information crammed into many of your sentences and there is hardly space to breathe.

    But, it's good! :)

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