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Old October 13th, 2012 (9:39 AM).
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    If it's not complete, then you shouldn't have posted this. That's against the section's rules. And if you rushed into this, then you shouldn't have posted it until you could work on it more so it doesn't have the rushed quality to it.

    Think about other ideas you could use for this, especially since you admit that you're using the Final Fantasy series and Bleach for inspiration. Look at them and find what it was that inspired you for this, and then think about how you could use those ideas in your story.

    Just don't post incomplete, rushed work.
    "Now the trumpet summons us again--
    not as a call to bear arms, though arms we need--
    not as a call to battle, though embattled we are--
    but a call to bear the burden of a long twilight struggle, year in and year out."
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