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Old June 20th, 2012 (8:25 PM). Edited June 20th, 2012 by Zero Darkness.
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The Cripple Who Is Whole
    Join Date: Jan 2012
    Location: Israel
    Age: 21
    Gender: Male
    Nature: Relaxed
    Posts: 138
    I think I`ll just create a new character with things very similier but still different, and start new, as I changed a lot in the past few weeks and so is my thinking. So I will abandon Ichigo as it will not harm anyone because he only contact with Kilik which is now gone.

    Name: Christopher Marshall

    Nickname (Optional): Chris.

    Age (10-13): 13

    Sex (Male or Female): Male

    Appearance (A picture can be provided instead of a description if you so wish.): head

    His body is very much like his head, he dresses in a tattered white undershirt with high collars, black pants, grey boots, and a long flowing black overcoat with a red hue that flares out into ragged ends and a black hood.
    When Christopher is fused he has a grey X on his chest and his skin become hard as steel and a little more blue. His eyes become red.

    Personality (How does your character act and react to others? Their mental state? Flaws and/or personal weaknesses?): Chris had a very traumatic childhood, because of that his social skills are very lack and low. He will not trust in someone he don`t know and will always think about ways to act when something might happen. Christopher will mostly ignore new friends even if they will prove to him that they will be his friends and not enemies, this might be his greatest flew. Christopher also can`t remember what happened 4 years ago, when the trauma has happened, despite the fact the he was 9 years old.

    History (Where did your character grow up? Who did they grow up with? What have they been doing before this? Any noteworthy events?): Christopher lived with his parents in Children`s City, he was an only child and his parents was there for him all the time, the three of them worked hard to stay alive in this kind of society, but they lived, and that was enough for them so they were happy. But this has changed because a single child, Nicholas, who killed any adult who didn`t want to go out. This part Christopher can`t remember; Nicholas went to Christopher home and told his parents to leave the city, but they refused to leave their sun alone, but Nicholas didn`t care he killed them without mercy, blood was been everywhere, and the nine years old Christopher was covered by blood, his parents blood!
    Christopher was kept alive, but not as a freeman, Nicholas made him work for him and steal things from others; but one day Christopher escaped, he escaped from the Children`s City. A voice guided him, guided him to the pillar in Mt. Coronet, there he found that he was chosen by a pokespirit, and he accepted it. Then he remembered, Nicholas has killed his parents, but that was all he remembered.
    Pokespirit (No legendaries. Alternate color schemes are allowed.)
    Species: Metagross

    Nickname (Optional): Ex

    Personality (Can be as short or long as you want): Ex four brains work as one, which help Christopher in his thoughts, Ex is trying to get Christopher friends and tell him that he can trust people but Chris refuse, and Ex knows that it`s because what happened 4 years ago.

    Moves (Maximum of 6. TM and egg moves are allowed. These are the moves your character gets when they fuse): Meteor Mash, Psychic, Thunder Punch, Magnet Rise, Agility, and Protect.

    Other (Optional): Ex knows what happened 4 years ago, as doe`s Chris, since Ex fused with Chris, but the thing is that Chris is ignoring everything that happened, he remember what happened but he cannot remember.

    Opening Post (This will be what we use to determine whether your writing skills are good enough. If accepted, you may feel free to copy paste your post here into the IC thread.):
    'This is the world; this is the state of it, devastated, ruined and broken, the children fighting the adults, and all for what? Food?! Water?! Another day?! All of this things doesn`t matter, what that is matter is the fact that you still alive, the fact that you are not under control, and free to do whatever you like!! This gift has been taken away from me, by a single kid, which wasn`t satisfied. I was satisfied my parents was. Today I don`t happy with the fact I`m alive, I`m happy with the fact that Nicholas is alive, waiting for me to remove his heart from his chest.' Christopher thought while he was standing at one of the peaks of Mt. Coronet.
    'The day will come Christopher, don`t rush, keep living and the day will come.' Said Ex.
    'You right, as always, but after all this years with you, I learned everything I could; now I need to fight stronger kids.'
    'You need to find friends, to fight with and to help each other'
    'But, I just can`t, not until I will remember what happened 4 years ago, all I can remember is that they died by Nicholas and that`s it.'
    'Maybe a friend or two will help you remember Chris, but do as you want, I will not push you.'
    Christopher looked at the sunset he unfused with Ex and sited on one of the rocks there.
    'It must be hard to him to not remember what happened, I can`t tell him that, it will ruin his progress and might even get him to do something idiotic which will end with his death, no, he must be the one to find it, he can, he just need to try' Ex thought to himself.
    Christopher felt asleep in the leaves bed he made long ago.
    "There are two types of fights. Whenever we are in battle, we must be one of the two. The fight for life or…the fight for pride! Right now…He is fighting for his pride! His wife’s pride…his men's pride…Most importantly…his own personal pride. Dismiss this as his stubbornness…and let him fight alone like this…" -Jushiro Ukitake, Bleach-

    "It's meaningless to just live, it's meaningless to just fight. I want to win!" -Ichigo Kurosaki, Bleach-
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