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Old October 26th, 2012 (11:16 AM).
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    Originally Posted by Volcanix769 View Post
    Just easy, just space out every sentence that's finished or have no connection towards the others.
    To add onto this, just hit the Enter button twice to make a new paragraph.

    Originally Posted by Demon Lord Ghirahim View Post
    Could I use what you said I should of writ?
    If you mean using exactly what Volcanix wrote, I wouldn't advise doing that. That's stealing another person's work. You can look at what he wrote and think about how to write in that style for your story. Plus, Volcanix has his own unique style of writing, and if yours doesn't match his, that one part would be really obvious.

    I was really tired at that time. It really downgrades my writing.
    Understandable. The same thing happens to me as well. The best thing to do is go back to your story when you're more awake and fix it up before you post it. This way, we get to see your better writing instead of your tired writing.
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