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Old May 8th, 2008 (2:42 PM).
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Shade isn't what he seems...
     
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    Bleh, chapter three is up on Hellgar.

    You know the link, it's in the signature. For some reason it seemed like it was over-dialogued, but it set up several things, so I'm satisfied with the turnout.
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    Old May 9th, 2008 (3:00 AM).
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    The boundless night~
       
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      Old May 9th, 2008 (7:50 AM).
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        The betaed version of Chapter 6 of Fable is now posted :D!
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        Old May 9th, 2008 (3:14 PM). Edited May 9th, 2008 by ShadowHoundoom.
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        Shade isn't what he seems...
           
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          Chapter Four of Hellgar is up.

          I'd really appreciate comments, not begging or anything but you know, it's just a reminder that I can't make my sophomore fic good without freshman feedback.
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          Old May 9th, 2008 (6:04 PM).
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          Ivy and Harley, quite a pair..
             
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            Hey, the sixth chapter of Cobalt the Legend is up and running. God, I've got to change that name...so lame...(trails off)..oh, I'm still on a post! Um, like ShadowHoundoom said, i do appreciate whatever comment you can give, but not to be greedy, because all mine have been BIG reviews.

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            Poison Ivy: (smiling) And what does the other half want?
            Two-Face: To hit you with a truck!
            Poison Ivy: (aside to others, referring to Two-Face) We used to date.
            Joker & Penguin: (catching her drift) Ahhhh...
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            Old May 9th, 2008 (6:51 PM).
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            On that 'Non stop road'
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            After three and a half months of delay, Chapter 5 of "Lurking in the Shadows" is FINALLY posted!
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            Old May 10th, 2008 (1:44 PM).
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            Shade isn't what he seems...
               
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              Chapter 5 is up for Hellgar.

              Things are starting to get explained... ever so slightly.
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              Old May 10th, 2008 (6:42 PM). Edited May 10th, 2008 by solopy567.
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              Giga....Drill....BREAKER! !!!!
                 
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                Come and read Pokemon Regicide on my thread! I hope you like it!

                Because, i see a lot of people viewing it, but not posting, so im a bit cranky
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                Old May 10th, 2008 (6:49 PM).
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                Oh Hai Thar~
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                hey... I ain't usually active in this thread, but I added a new chapter in A Legend's Journey, Chapter 3, which things are getting a bit difficult.

                Bye~
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                Old May 11th, 2008 (3:07 PM).
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                The Game is Afoot!
                   
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                  Chapter two of "Thief in the Night" is now up. The thread itself hasn't been bumped, but it is still accessible from the link in my signature, so hurry over and actually, I dunno... REVIEW IT THIS TIME?!?!?!?
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                  Old May 12th, 2008 (7:55 AM).
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                    It's a tad bit late, I'll admit, but my one-shot for the fan fiction challenge. The Deathly Hallows was posted a few days ago. No, I am not listening to any complaints of plagiarism.
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                    Old May 12th, 2008 (8:09 AM).
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                      Um. I just wrote a fic...So uh...Here.
                      Fast Times At Samuel Oak High
                      It's PokemonSpecial.
                      The rest is self explanitory if you can read the name.
                      Haaaaaa....Don't kill me.
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                      Old May 15th, 2008 (12:45 AM).
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                        Chapter two of The Hoenn Empire is up.
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                        Old May 15th, 2008 (1:13 PM).
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                          New chapter of PSM: DP is up!
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                          Old May 15th, 2008 (1:35 PM).
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                            The long awaited Chapter 10 of Bruno's Journey will be posted later on this week, possibly this weekend. (That is, if anyone is still waiting for it. And if they are, then I am sorry for the 4 or 5 month wait.) My Muse is kicking me in the butt for not writing on the story for a while, so after gaining much momentum and steam that I need to fuel my lovely Muse, I have decided to charge head on into Bruno's Journey and finish it up.

                            Also, for those of you who want a story that will soon explain everything that is happening in Bruno's Journey then check out my new fanfic called I Bleed Black!!!!
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                            Old May 17th, 2008 (7:34 AM).
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                              Chapter Two of Blazing Dreams: The Eternal Night is now up. The link is in my sig.
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                              Old May 17th, 2008 (9:00 AM).
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                                The sixth chapter of my fic, Kanto: The Disputed Frontier is up. In departure from the action/suspenseful tone of the last chapter, I try to focus more on the characters in this one. Enjoy!
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                                Old May 17th, 2008 (12:31 PM).
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                                  chapters 10 and 11 of my fanfic are up! These chapters are about Jack and megan fighting against the pokemon of route 1! As always the link is in my sig
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                                  Old May 17th, 2008 (1:12 PM).
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                                    Hey everyone I have just posted a fanfic called DragonBall Z: The Story of the Lasy Saiyan. In the other writing section. Hope you all enjoy it.
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                                    Old May 17th, 2008 (2:06 PM).
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                                      As promised, I have released Part 1 of VS. Drifblim and I'm revising Part 2 as we speak.
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                                      Old May 18th, 2008 (10:31 AM).
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                                        chapter 12 of my fic is up! enjoy it! - you will - the link is in my sig.
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                                        Old May 19th, 2008 (5:47 PM).
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                                          Chapter one of my new Mystery Dungeon story Pokemon Teams Light and Dark is up! Feel free to read it! :3
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                                          Old May 21st, 2008 (2:41 PM).
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                                            I just got made a new fic after I cancelled my first because although I didn't know it, a clone of TurtleKing's PokeSpecial: DP. It's called Sinnoh Generations and it's about Riley from Iron Island in the D/P games. It's his partly about his journey and partly how Cyrus becomes the leader of Team Galactic. If anyone would like to review that would be nice.

                                            http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=137994
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                                            Old May 22nd, 2008 (12:28 AM).
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                                              Chapter Three of The Hoenn Empire is up
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                                              Old May 22nd, 2008 (8:58 AM).
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                                                A new story has been posted, by an author new to this site. Pokemon: A New Era.

                                                Enjoy and review.
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