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Old April 29th, 2008 (7:39 AM).
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    Checked the script videos. It was all nicely done (except for the usual grammar problems)

    And about the last screenies, I like the female sprite in the trainer card (a Flannery Dawn? ). The whole mapping is good as well (mapping caves is not that easy, but you just need more practice)

    Of course, now I am wondering what is Brendan doing in the middle of an icy cave. Oh well, I'll find out sometime XD

    Keep going!
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    Old April 30th, 2008 (12:59 AM).
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      Hello, mitchel1. I like the new screenshots, but the new heroine, Dawn... it looks really bad. There is no shading, or very poorly done shading, as well as the red shading on Dawn's pants, when it should be white or gray.

      Also, It looks like you resized its head, so it looks very weird, and it has a weird pose for Dawn.

      Maybe you should work on your spriting skills. Other than what I said, this hack looks really good!
      I agree with you Esmas. It's not really good to have Dawn with trousers. I think you should rip the Dawn trainer card sprite from D/P.
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      Old May 13th, 2008 (5:48 AM).
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        Hello, mitchel1. I like the new screenshots, but the new heroine, Dawn... it looks really bad. There is no shading, or very poorly done shading, as well as the red shading on Dawn's pants, when it should be white or gray.

        Also, It looks like you resized its head, so it looks very weird, and it has a weird pose for Dawn.

        Maybe you should work on your spriting skills. Other than what I said, this hack looks really good!
        Hey, and yes i know i'm not so really good in spriting if you see ;) it is my first trainer sprite so it's not so good. have someon a good dawn sprite of curse i'l give you credits..

        @Zel: Hey, Thnx Zel ^^ and yes i know i've already someon who help me with my engles :) and thnx for that you like the dawn sprite :) it's my first you see ;) and thnx about the mapping ;) the cave's are really hard to map (good) because the map 's of the cave's are really big ;) and you'll see about brendan ;)

        @prince112: yes maby that is a good idea

        @ZapMolCuno: Thnx ^^

        Ontopic:
        I'm back people and 100% back in buisness with hacking :) I've got for you people 4 new screens with new awesome tiles ^^ Credits to kyledove for the wooden house and that tree (not the d/p tree but that other one) and to Don Patch for that water plants (all those tiles recollord by me) ^^ anyway... Enjoy the new screens :D


        That whas all people...
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        Btw. that wooden house is not a costom house you'll only see them in Cold Valley (mountens).
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        Old May 13th, 2008 (5:55 AM).
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        nice new screenies... they're really nice and peaceful.
        keep things up~
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        Old May 13th, 2008 (7:24 AM).
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          In my opinion, the DP and Kyle's house dont mix that much, but I guess they are fine as long as you dont put them in the same place at the same time (yeah, that's Nintendo's style, I actually know that houses in real life are not supposed to be all the same in the same location, but this is not real life), but whatever, Kyledove's tiles are always good to see.

          Oh, by the way, his tree, combined with the DP tree palette ended up looking awesome
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          Old May 13th, 2008 (9:58 AM).
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            good to see ya back =]

            dawn OW is... odd... the head looks like dawn, but the body...

            about the tiles, the trees are very good

            about the houses... i agree with zel, they are totally different from the d/p ones.. but still cool

            the water plants are very original, but they dont look like "water plants", they look more like "plants in water"...
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            Old May 14th, 2008 (8:32 AM). Edited May 14th, 2008 by mitchel1.
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              In my opinion, the DP and Kyle's house dont mix that much, but I guess they are fine as long as you dont put them in the same place at the same time (yeah, that's Nintendo's style, I actually know that houses in real life are not supposed to be all the same in the same location, but this is not real life), but whatever, Kyledove's tiles are always good to see.

              Oh, by the way, his tree, combined with the DP tree palette ended up looking awesome :)
              Hey Zel yes i know the don't mix good... but you'll only found that houses in cold valley ;) so in cold valley there are no D/P houses ;) exemple: you'll only found that houses (only for now in beta 1.0) by Glow Shire Village and Regran Valley

              and about that combination thnx Zel ^^

              @bruom: Thnx ^^ and yes i know the ow of dawn still must be change ;) i'll work on it if beta 1.0 is released ;) i'm now working with scripts in the fossil cave ^^
              and thnx ^^

              @riolu 9 and destinedjagold: thnx ^^

              @Ontopic:
              I've got some small updates for you people ^^ i've fixed the (Big) house tile with some beter outline (black) and the shadow (under that house)
              and i've make 1 new little tile i've maked a little Lab sign.. so you can see what the lab is ^^
              anyway here are the screens... Enjoy

              (Here you can see what is fixed ;))
              and here is the lab screen with that sign ^^

              That was all people...
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              Old May 14th, 2008 (8:36 AM).
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                This hack has some potential for sure. The tiles are like in DP, only they aren't 3D.
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                Old May 19th, 2008 (9:09 AM).
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                  This hack has some potential for sure. The tiles are like in DP, only they aren't 3D.

                  Thnx en yes i know but the houses are nice ^^ right?

                  Ontopic:
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                  People i got 4 new screens for you ^^ Enjoy you see (Example: The third meeting with gary in the fossil cave, The new sign in the begin (i.p.v Game Freak inc. new icoon) (thnx to Xtinction for the tut) and a lot more.
                  Nieuwe tekst in begin

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                  That was all people
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                  Old May 19th, 2008 (9:42 PM).
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                    Nice Mitchel, but your post contains some dutch language.....
                    Fix it man
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                    Old May 20th, 2008 (5:56 AM).
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                      Nice Mitchel, but your post contains some dutch language.....
                      Fix it man;)
                      Hey ZapMolCuno.. Thnx^^ en yes i saw it :P i'll fix it soon ;)

                      @Ontopic:
                      Again *Update*
                      Hello people i've got 4 new screens from the Fossil cave. here you see (Example: Jessie and james again :) (Script with them you'll see tommorow (because i still work on it))
                      And a lot more ^^ but i'll let it short here are the screens...


                      Well i hope you like it people ^^
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                      Old May 20th, 2008 (8:40 AM).
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                        I love the screens, they look great.
                        I like the stair tile you inserted and the tropical trees look awesome. And again, the overworlds are awesome.
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                        Old May 20th, 2008 (1:07 PM).
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                          ok, by the new screenies, here are my comments

                          jesse and james sprites are very good

                          the sprites dont seem to be on the fog, try fixing it if possible

                          the stairs in the first screen of your latest post (those with blue things) dont look nice in the cave, IMO white would be better

                          in the last pic of the same post, the character is facing... an abyss? it would be better to put a wall there...

                          i think thats all, folks...
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                          Old May 21st, 2008 (11:47 AM).
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                            ok, by the new screenies, here are my comments

                            jesse and james sprites are very good

                            the sprites dont seem to be on the fog, try fixing it if possible

                            the stairs in the first screen of your latest post (those with blue things) dont look nice in the cave, IMO white would be better

                            in the last pic of the same post, the character is facing... an abyss? it would be better to put a wall there...

                            i think thats all, folks...
                            Hey bruom.. thnx about the sprites ^^
                            about the fog i've removed the fog so you don't see that ^^
                            you've right about the stairs i've already recollord it to brown ^^
                            and about that last thing... i'll try to fix it.

                            @C3LEBI-愛: Thnx ^^

                            *Ontopic
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                            Hello people i've got two new screens for you. Here you see the new gym tile (Credits to Gary93) for that tile and a new screen in the Fossil cave where you see that i've fixed the staris (to brown) and a new OW from kabuto shell (left and right) Enjoy the new screens ^^


                            The video with jessie and james you'll see tommorow people ^^
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                              Good job mitchel.

                              There is 1 thing I want to say and that is about this screen:


                              The Pokémoncenter is to bright, so is the stairs. Try using the original pallette of FR Pokémoncenter.

                              Anyway keep up the good work
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                              Old May 21st, 2008 (7:41 PM).
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                                Good job mitchel.

                                There is 1 thing I want to say and that is about this screen:


                                The Pokémoncenter is to bright, so is the stairs. Try using the original pallette of FR Pokémoncenter.

                                Anyway keep up the good work
                                Thats a gym. An alsmost all the D/P palletes and tiles are extremely bright. I bet it'll look fine in game. Though the stair railing should be a bit darker in my opinion. Good luck and good job, Mitchel1, can't wait to see a beta.
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                                Old May 22nd, 2008 (8:33 AM).
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                                  Good job mitchel.

                                  There is 1 thing I want to say and that is about this screen:


                                  The Pokémoncenter is to bright, so is the stairs. Try using the original pallette of FR Pokémoncenter.

                                  Anyway keep up the good work
                                  1e thing it's a gym.. second thing those are the pallets of fire red (Pokecenter)
                                  and thnx ^^

                                  @Dude120: The stairs have the real pallet of FR too but i can try to fix it. and thnx ^^

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                                  Hello people i got one new screen for you ^^ in this screen you'll see the new (Fixed) Poké gym and that stronk tile (Credits to Don Patch for it) anyway.. Enjoy the new screen ^^

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                                  Old May 23rd, 2008 (12:13 AM).
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                                    Sorry, my mistake. It is strange that the colortone is that bright.

                                    Anyway good luck
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                                      The creator hasn't released a beta yet. Thus, you can't play it yet.

                                      Mitchel1, you should try to darken the pallete of the red roof a little. It would look better if you did so.
                                      The tree tiles look great, nice work. Keep on going!
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                                      Old May 24th, 2008 (6:04 AM). Edited May 24th, 2008 by bruom.
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                                        in the cave, the stairs right from the character arent fitting perfectly

                                        in the other screenshot, theres a problem behind the gym, the soil is grassy, normal, and then directly goes to the rocky, lower soil... there are some tiles missing...

                                        also, it seems that the stairs lead to the wall...
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                                          Hey Mitchel.
                                          Cool to see you're posting your hack here, and on AWF.
                                          Hoever, i won't post comments on your screens here, i'll post them on AWF.

                                          If you didn't know, i'm Arseus on AWF.

                                          @ZapMolCuno, nice to see you here too
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                                            in the cave, the stairs right from the character arent fitting perfectly

                                            in the other screenshot, theres a problem behind the gym, the soil is grassy, normal, and then directly goes to the rocky, lower soil... there are some tiles missing...

                                            also, it seems that the stairs lead to the wall...
                                            You're right i hope i'll fix it ^^ and about that grassy that is (i hope ) now good look to the updates ;)

                                            @to the other people: i know that the pallet of the gym is not that good but i've fix it to a ownage pallet ^^ so you can see obvisouly the good outline (black)

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                                            Zeh new Updates + Fixes
                                            Hello people i got for you 7 new screens where you see the new fixed gym (again) but now is the gym done and pure Ownage ^^ stairs in that fossil cave are fixed :) ect.
                                            And by the updates you'll see the new script with lance in Willsum City, a new tile made by me (A eaten apple tile where normal you see munchlax. The tile is basic of the leftovers item ^^ (say if you don't like the tile then i'll remove it ^^) and two new screens screens of the past ^^.... but i've talked enough enjoy the new Fixes + updates ^^
                                            the gym tile ^^
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                                            Before >>>>>>>> now

                                            The fixed stairs tile ^^ (in de fossil cave)
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                                            Before >>>>>>>> now

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                                            that was all people I hope you like'd the new updates ^^
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                                            Old May 25th, 2008 (8:41 AM).
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                                              The gym looks better than ever. Now the colors finally match the whole thing. Nice work!
                                              And I like the Lance event. I wonder what his part in the hack will be....hmmm...
                                              The updates look sweet bud. Keep on going....
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                                                The gym looks better than ever. Now the colors finally match the whole thing. Nice work!
                                                And I like the Lance event. I wonder what his part in the hack will be....hmmm...
                                                The updates look sweet bud. Keep on going....
                                                Thnx ^^ and thnx about the lance event ^^ you'll see him now (beta 1.0) 1 time by beta 2.0 you'll meet him again ^^ and again thnx ^^

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                                                Hello people i got two new screens for you ^^ with the D/P waterstone tile (Credits to WAH/Pey for that tile recollord by me ^^) and about the munchlax screen where you see the eaten apples are fixed the are now on the ground ^^
                                                Enjoy de new screens ^^

                                                That whas all people.
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                                                  the images are well who Deveria change only a couple of things like the tiles of the stone water corrigeles pallets, as well others like me a beta ^ ^
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