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Old June 8th, 2009 (6:24 AM). Edited June 8th, 2009 by Chesu.
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    I haven't added colou, shading or even facial details so before I do, your opinion on it.
    The legs are curved a bit too much, and the hind legs seem to short compared to how low that part of the body is... you should make the pelvic area just a bit smaller, rather than make the legs longer, though.


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    Old June 8th, 2009 (10:01 PM).
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      I jusr relised I accidently saved it in JPG I'll have to redo it.
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      Old June 8th, 2009 (10:41 PM).
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        What, the outline? It looks like it contains just two colors... black and white. It shouldn't have been damaged if it's so few colors.
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        Old June 9th, 2009 (2:22 AM).
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          The outline was ruined but I fixed it I'm going to fix the posture and then colour it.
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          Old June 10th, 2009 (1:15 AM).
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            Old June 13th, 2009 (9:10 PM).
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              Hey Chesu I finished my sprite. I changed it completly (well, only a bit) and I cheated a little bit by using other Pokemons parts. (see if you can guess which ones!!)
              Anyway, how do you think it looks?
              I've also added some tiles I made there too. They're kind of sucky cause its my first try at making them. i can't remember why Sandslash and Shaymin are there for but anyway...
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              Old June 14th, 2009 (2:13 AM).
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                Looks like you used Shaymin and Sandslash as color references.

                There are a few problems with your sprite... it really needs to be smoothed out around the edges, looks flat so needs more shading, and one of the arms is a lot bigger than the other.
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                Old June 21st, 2009 (2:34 PM).
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                  Here's another trace-over I made that I think turned out pretty nicely:
                  Credit to Ashurasonic for the Concept Art. And yes I was given permission to use it.
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                  Old June 21st, 2009 (7:20 PM).
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                    Looks good! You should post the original image alongside, or at least link to it, for comparison. :D

                    While I'm here, I'd just like to apologize to... whoever it is that's been waiting for the backsprite tutorials. I have the first one a little more than halfway done, but I haven't had a whole lot of time to work on it lately. I hope to have it finished before too much longer.
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                    Old June 22nd, 2009 (5:43 AM).
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                      I'm patient.
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                      Old June 22nd, 2009 (5:53 AM).
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                        Ok here's the link. ?I also have an idea for a new tutorial. How about techniques for shading things such as scales,fur,etc.
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                        Old June 22nd, 2009 (11:07 AM).
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                          ZephyrPlusle is actually working on a guest tutorial on that topic right now.
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                          Old June 22nd, 2009 (2:56 PM).
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                            Oh well I can't wait to see it! And also if you think it's necessary, a tutorial on a more advanced way of spriting with geometry or another technique would be nice.
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                            Old June 25th, 2009 (12:05 AM).
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                              Well, that was my very first result, using your amazing tutorial, but please, tell me what I could do to make it better.

                              It didn't turn out how I invisioned it at all. x)
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                              Old June 25th, 2009 (7:54 AM).
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                                You should round and touch up all of the outlines... and try using the the color palettes of existing Pokemon, it will make your sprite look more natural. I like the face!
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                                Old June 25th, 2009 (4:36 PM).
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                                  Very nice tutorial.

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                                  Old June 25th, 2009 (7:12 PM).
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                                    Dude this tutorial helped a lot. I made a custom trainer and almagation (animated), but I'm new to the site and don't have enough posts to put up a URL >.>
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                                    Old June 25th, 2009 (7:52 PM).
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                                      Old June 25th, 2009 (10:31 PM). Edited June 26th, 2009 by Pokefreak437.
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                                        Three Starter Pokemon I made. The Pig had a Cyndaquil's head (heavily edited) and Nuzleaf's Leaf as a tail. Stantler's legs. The bird Water thing is completely scratched. Try to guess what I did for the snake :O
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                                          I know some of the animations are a little choppy, but oh well.
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                                          Old June 26th, 2009 (12:18 AM).
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                                              This is my first sprite, tell me waht do you think about it? How can I improve it?
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                                              This is my first sprite, tell me waht do you think about it? How can I improve it?
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                                              Old July 7th, 2009 (6:55 AM).
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                                                More shading would help, as would smoothing out some of the edges. I like the design!
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                                                Old July 7th, 2009 (9:15 AM).
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                                                  I know I am not chesu, but I can say, you need a bit more shading, especially on that arm there...
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                                                  More shading would help, as would smoothing out some of the edges. I like the design!
                                                  Thanks! I added more shading as well as smoothing edges. Take a look:



                                                  I made it kinda of big, is it possible to resize it to the size of Nidorino or something else?
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