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Old November 21st, 2009 (1:08 PM). Edited November 23rd, 2009 by dooku01.
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    Your walking home from school.
    Good grades,lots of friends,delicious lunch,you've got it made.
    Then you hear a sound in the bushes.
    ''Must be hearing things.''You think to yourself.
    Then a pikachu pops out of the bushes!
    ''Pika Pika. PIKA PIKA!''It says to you.
    You all of a sudden are sucked into a portal out of nowhere!
    Along with the pikachu,of course.
    Then you hear a screaching sound.
    ''HREEEEE SHREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!''
    Then you're in a world of tricks all of a sudden.
    You fall slower,and slower and slower........
    .......
    Everything's fuzzy.
    You drift back asleep.
    ''ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!''
    Owch!
    You're waken up by the pikachus Shock Wave.
    Then you hear the screeching sound again.
    ''HREEEEEEEEEEEEE SHREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!''
    Pikachu hides in a bush....... .......or the up-side-down top of a tree!
    ''What's going on?'' You say.

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    Old November 21st, 2009 (1:33 PM).
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      Um, I think you should add more detail. Most people think that threads should be well thought out before posted.

      If this is going to be te beginning of your game it sound interesting.
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      Old November 22nd, 2009 (5:04 AM).
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        yeah,your right. i'll try to add more detail
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